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King blah blah blah Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 11:28 am | |
| yeah, sort of a friendly romance I guess. BTW, got any ideas for the name of the story? I chose the first thing that came to mind. | |
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singerofallsongs Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:30 pm | |
| hmm, i think u should first write out the story and then choose a title for it. that's wat i always do. | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:40 pm | |
| NO FREAKIN LUV CIRCLES WITH ME EMILE AND ADAM!!!!!!!!! u should put lee in >=] hes soooo awesome!! >< =33 kyaa!!!!!!!! and who the heck is singerofallsongs?!! GAH!?!?!
I WATCH HORROR MOVIES?!! wtc im creeped out by anything -___- *sighs* ok whatever so be it......... wahahahahhaha emile scares ADAM!!! WAGAGAGAGA AH DIE STUPID ANT!!
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singerofallsongs Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:42 pm | |
| huh?! u forgot me?! *SOB* your so meaaaaaaaannnn !!!!!!!!!! and who's lee? remember i kept stealing abi's pics and hiding them at her b-day party and u were helping me? | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:47 pm | |
| o yaaaaaaaa =] hey they were my pics >=P i drew zems lolzzzzzz ............ and lee is the cool guy whos out of college =] hes my instructor when i go rock climbing!! =33 | |
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I R SMEXY General Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:52 pm | |
| wooh! that is a good story. but arent ninja's serious bout stuff? oh and meiye, i guess romance couldnt hurt. but how come me adam are the pranksters? and how come i got hurt the most? questions:are we ninjas in training? Chapter 3 should kinda come out like this(this is my opinion, u dont have to agree with it anthony.)
Chapter 3: Problem In The Woods The next day, Adam, Natalie, and Emile ran to the Ninja Academy & Dormatory. As always they were late. "C'mon you guys lets get there before sensei will have our heads!" said Natalie. "Fine, I'll race you! Secret Technique: Flash Step!" said Emile, while moving fast. "No way! I learned that too!" said Natalie, and Adam while performing the technique. While racing, some bandits came in there way. "Heh heh, it's just some little brats!" said Bandit 1, "Its gonna cost you some gold to get through these woods!" "Huh, we'll take you guys down with on hit!" said Natalie, Emile, and Adam drew their wooden swords, "I got these guys," said Adam, "Flash Step!" "AHH!" said Bandit 1 as he fell to the ground, unconsicous. "Piece of cake!" Adam said confidently. "YAHH!" said Bandit 2. "Look Out!" said Emile as he flash stepped, and pushed Adam out of the way. While pushing Adam out of the way, Emile got cut by the bandit's knife on his shoulder. "Ouch!" he said while hitting the ground. "DONT HURT MY FRIENDS!" Natalie exclaimed while she ran agry at the bandit. While the bandit was ready to hurt natalie, Emile flash stepped behind the bandit. "Ah, Son of a....." said the bandit while falling unconsious. "That was a close one." said Emile while holding his shoulder. "Are you okay?" said Adam. "I have medicine," Natalie said, "here let me put on your shoulder." "Thanks Natalie." Emile said.
"OH CRAP!" Adam shouted, "what time is it?" The three student lost track of time, and they had to get to the academy. "It's 11:30!" said Natalie, "we have 10 minutes, and we still have a long way to go!" "Dont worry, we'll get there," Emile said, "Strawberry! come!" Whoosh! A shadow fell apon the sky. It was Strawberry, Emile's dragon. "When did you get a dragon Emile?" Adam asked. "I got it when my parent's left on their journey," Emile replied, "I raised it ever since, and now, he's the closest to me since my parents died." "Aww, he is so cute!" Natalie exclaimed, "what are we waitin for? Let's Go!" They climbed Strawberry, and were ready. Since Emile's connection with Strawberry is strong, he can speak to him in mind. "*Strawberry, lets go! We need to get to the academy fast!*" Emile said telepathically. "*Alright! tell every to hang on!*" "Hang on everyone!" Emile said. After that, Strawberry flew through the air. "WOAAHHH!" Emile, Natalie, And Adam shouted as they flew throught the air. Little did they know that Sensei Eikai was watching them
"They are strong, Master." said Head Ninja 1. "Yes, and they work together." said Head Ninja 2. "I believe the village is in good hands while we are long gone." said Sensei Eikai. "They are ready for the test, Sensei Eikai." said Kenkaishi, a higher ranking ninja, and a friend to Emile, Adam, And Natalie. "should we prepare it?" "Not yet, another week then prepare it." said Sensei Eikai. "Yes Master." Kenkaishi replied.
END OF CHAPTER 3 Well what do you guys think? it dosent have to be in the story. i just wrote cuz i like to write. also i put in Kenkaishi, (who is a different name for kakashi can use same name right?)(I changed chibi name i guess that copying also..)
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:03 pm | |
| yayzzzzzzzz KAKASHI!! >< but u no we might get sued for using the char?...... well we can just change him a bit lolzzz =] or something but were just using the name =] *nudge nudge* awesome u got a dragon =]!! why do i feel like im weak? -__- im a tag along..... where did u get dragon drive from emile? >=] wow ure like rewriting naruto almost =P | |
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I R SMEXY General Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:07 pm | |
| done. i edited it. I know about dragon drive! i read all the time when i go to borders! BORDERS YAY! i go to the white flint borders. | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:16 pm | |
| dragon drive is soo freakin awesome! =] keep writing u and anthony can both write bits of the story....... lol i just like reading it >=] | |
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I R SMEXY General Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:05 pm | |
| its not my story but i guess i can write some that is if anthony lets me. | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:16 pm | |
| no duhrrrrrrrrrrr......... i just wanna read something cool =] | |
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King blah blah blah Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:45 pm | |
| Your a really good author, I was going at a different angle but that works to:) do you want to alternate chapters or work on different ones that sort of start from the same beggening? | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:02 pm | |
| i say u 2 should alternate =] | |
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King blah blah blah Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:06 pm | |
| I thibk its good, just give me one more chapter then see whacha think. If you guys dont think im doing it good, then we can alternate. I just have this idea in my head, thaat sorta tells me where the books going. that can be chapter 3 though, if u guys want it to be. | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:15 pm | |
| ok then hurry up and write it >=P | |
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starwarsguy Master Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:19 pm | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:26 pm | |
| ........... baka!.............................. | |
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:30 pm | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:52 pm | |
| ok adam your about to die.......... | |
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King blah blah blah Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:00 pm | |
| guys, can you pleases use the spam froum for that? its alot easier to read a story if the chapters arent all spread out. | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:17 pm | |
| well if u hurried and wrote them then we dnt hve to wait *grumble grumble* also anthony ill ask jack to make an off limit topic. so he can just copy and paste all the parts into one big one!!!!!!!!!!! =] | |
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King blah blah blah Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:26 pm | |
| hey, I can do that myself. | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:41 pm | |
| i no i just wanted to feel superior =] | |
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singerofallsongs Assassin Panda
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:37 pm | |
| this is going to be so cool! good job emile. well, i just randomly picked who natalie was in luv with so it could be she's in luv with u, u in luv with her and adam in luv with her. oh, how about u add jack in the story somewhere too? make him a evil guy! and then add in victoria as a queen or something! then add daniel as a evil guy too! u guys should seriously alternate! both of u are really good writers! | |
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kakashi pwns u all ASSASSIN LORD
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| Subject: Re: ninja story Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:59 pm | |
| o0 victoria? o.0 lolzzzzzzz why am i in a cirlcle with weirdos? -__________________________________________________- | |
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